Editing, feedback

The feedback we got from todays lesson from other members of the class was that they didn't understand the narrative. We didn't have the film finished enough for the narrative to be understood yet but we still weren't sure whether our finished opening would be understood. We took this into consideration and all decided that a voice over would be the best idea.
We had originally planned on doing a voice over for our opening as we liked the opening sequences in which the voice over introduces the character.
Having the feedback from todays lesson helped in the way that we had watched our film too many times to see faults that other groups may have picked up on and the comments gave us the motivation to continue the film.